When
writing one, I was confused by the description of lecturer. That’s because she
does not explain in detail what it is unity and coherence in paragraphs, so when
I try to write and connect between the one sentence with other sentences, I
can’t apply the unity and the unity and coherence within the paragraph,
especially do any task which I gather it was never corrected by lecturer, she
just saw it presence or absence of the task. Of course I feel that every task
which I have gathered is correct task.
Beside
that, I was bored with the lecturer teaching strategies. This is because she is
only a lot of gave the task any time without a guidance and clear explanation
of the assignment it. We were only asked to create it, for example we will
asked to create paragraph on each meeting only.
The
last one is I felt anxious with my grammar because in writing , grammar is very
important and necessary particular concern, because if one put one letter in
sentence, it has to be a mistake that could result in the meaning of what we
mean is not reached.


